LEFT BEHIND: In The Twinkling Of An Eye

A fanfiction short story by Vic George

NOTE: Scripture references are from the New King James version of the Holy Bible.
Also, this short story was written prior to the release of The Rapture, so as a work of fanfiction it has no canonicity with the rest of the LEFT BEHIND stories in either the adult or young readers series.


The night that the Rapture took place, Irene Steele had just finished her day of housework, of preparing dinner for herself and Raymie, of helping her son with homework, and of seeing him prepare for bed. She was now alone in her bedroom, knelt down on the floor in prayer to God, speaking to Him about things on her mind like her husband Rayford and her daughter Chloe. Things haven't been the same since Chloe went to college and she and Raymie started going to New Hope Village Church, finding and accepting Jesus Christ as their Lord and Savior for the first time in their lives. Her husband, who worked for Pan Continental as an airline pilot, started spending more time away from her and Raymie just being on the job, and while Raymie didn't seem to have a problem with it, Irene worried about Rayford's absence in his son's everyday life. Just as difficult as it was to try sharing her newfound faith in the Lord was her difficulties in trying to talk to her husband about how Raymie was doing in school and all.
The last time she tried to talk about Jesus Christ to her husband was on the subject of the rapture. He basically mocked her for what she believed, saying he'd keel right over just by seeing her and all the "good people" fly away to Jesus, despite her again saying that Christians aren't good people, just forgiven. Not that he was the only one who did mock her about the rapture, or when she believed it was going to happen. There were some Christians outside her church she talked to that either didn't believe in the rapture or didn't believe that it would happen "pre-trib", before the time of the Tribulation took place. Some of those people spoke rather unkindly to her about their objections, saying that she was setting herself up for the deception of the Antichrist, trying to use Scripture to prove to her that "God doesn't rapture His own people out of tribulations that they must go through".
Those kind of people Irene could deal with, as she and her church also dealt with spokespeople from other denominational churches who were pressuring all churches to join together "to win the world for Christ". Her pastor Vernon Billings, as much as he wanted to believe that their goals were just, somehow suspected in his spirit that they were not seeking real spiritual unity with other churches, but rather just unity based on naming Jesus Christ without really knowing Him and who and what He really is based on Scripture. Even as the complaints leveled against her and New Hope Village Church that they were "not joined up with the body of Christ" by not going along with their plans of unity became increasingly and insidiously accusatory in nature, nothing they could say could shake Irene from what she believed in the Lord was true about what was to come.
Her husband, however, was a matter that only her prayer life with God could help her cope with. She loved him with everything she had and more, and she didn't want to see him and Chloe miss out on being with her, Raymie, and God for all eternity. Despite all her worries, she gave thanks to God for everything He gave her through Jesus, including the peace she never had before becoming a true born-again Christian.
On that night, as Irene slept in her bedroom and Raymie slept in his, she suddenly heard the sound of a loud trumpet blasting outside her house, and the voice of an archangel say, "Behold, the Bridegroom has come." Instantly she awoke, and as she did, she felt herself change. It was as if everything in her body was no longer subject to any more pain, any more aging. She was now being clothed with incorruption and immortality, as the Scriptures had foretold.
Also in that instant, she started to rise out of her bed...and not just out of her bed, but also out of her clothes and soon out of her house, where she also saw her son Raymie rise in the same manner. In fact, she saw millions of souls rise from the earth, either out of their houses or their cars or other vehicles, and even those who were in the graves, all naked and drawn to the One standing in the clouds, calling them by name, waiting for them to gather to Him.
As soon as all the souls risen from the earth had gathered together in the clouds, Jesus said to them, "Let not your heart be troubled; you believed in God, you believed also in Me. In My Father's house are many mansions; if it were not so, I would have told you. I have gone to prepare a place for you. Now that I have gone and prepared a place for you, I have come again and received you to Myself; that where I am, there you may be also. And where I go you know, and the way you know. I am the way, the truth, and the life. No one comes to the Father except through Me."
"I am also the resurrection and the life. Those who believed in Me, though they have died, shall live, and those who have lived and believed in Me shall never die. They have now passed on from death to life. Most assuredly, I say to you, those who have kept My word shall never see death."
And then the massed multitude of souls followed Jesus as He, in that same instant of time, left the clouds and headed straight into the universe and then into what Paul had called "the third heaven", where the blackness of the universe was replaced by a bright whiteness, and then there was a great throne, and One who sat upon it who was like a jasper and a sardius stone in appearance, with a dazzling rainbow around the throne like an emerald. Along the way, Jesus reminded them of the various promises He had given to those who overcame: among them, the right to eat from the Tree of Life in the paradise of God; the crown of life to those who were faithful unto death; the hidden manna; a white stone with a new name written on it that only the receiver knows about; power over the nations; the Morning Star; white raiment that they were now clothed in; the name of God, the New Jerusalem from heaven, and Jesus' new name written on their foreheads.
Soon they have all gathered at the Bema seat of Jesus Christ, where their works were judged and tested by fire to see what sort they were. A great deal of them wept as they saw their works consumed by fire, yet they praised the Lord that they were still saved, as though through fire. Those whose works endured the testing received their various rewards from the Lord, the various crowns promised in Scripture. Each of them were shown the various mansions that their works in the Lord have built, in various states of grandeur, yet the sight of those mansions still paled in significance next to the Lord to came to each of them in their new heavenly places.
Afterward, they were all gathered in the throne room of God, where they saw Him whose appearance was like an jasper and a sardius stone, surrounded by a rainbow that looked like an emerald; the four creatures with eyes all around and six wings who proclaimed God's praise day and night, and the 24 elders who casted their crowns before Him. Irene, Raymie, and all the assembled saints did the same with their crowns and worshipped Him, saying with the elders, "You are worthy, O Lord, to receive glory and honor and power; for You created all things, and by Your will they exist and were created."
Then they saw at the right hand of Him who sat on the throne a scroll written on the inside and on the back, sealed with seven seals. A mighty angel then proclaimed in a loud voice, "Who is worthy to open the scroll and to loose its seals?" There was a brief silence as those gathered around, and supposedly all of creation, pondered who was indeed worthy to open the scroll and to look at it. Then one of the elders said, "Do not weep. Behold, the Lion of the tribe of Judah, the Root of David, has prevailed to open the scroll and to loose its seven seals."
Then Jesus again appeared, only this time in the form of a lamb with seven horns and seven eyes that represented the seven spirits of God, in the midst of the throne and of the four creatures and of the elders. The Lamb made an incredible leap toward the right hand of Him who sat on the throne and snagged the seven-sealed scroll, changing back into His human form as He landed with the scroll now in His hand. Instantly, the four creatures and the elders fell down before Him who was the Lamb, each of them having a harp and golden bowls full of incense, which were the prayers of the saints, and sang a new song, saying, "You are worthy to take the scroll, and to open its seals; for You were slain, and have redeemed us to God by Your blood out of every tribe and tongue and people and nation, and have made us kings and priests to our God; and we shall reign on the earth."
Then the assembled saints looked and saw thousands upon thousands of angels gathering around the throne, the four creatures, and the elders, saying with a loud voice: "Worthy is the Lamb who was slain to receive power and riches and wisdom, and strength and honor and glory and blessing!" And then came the sound of every creature which is in heaven and on the earth and under the earth and such as are in the sea, and all that are in them, which the assembled saints heard saying: "Blessing and honor and glory and power be to Him who sits on the throne, and to the Lamb, forever and ever!" Then the four living creatures said, "Amen!" and the twenty-four elders fell down and worshipped Him who lives forever and ever.
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